Comments on: I have an enemy. No, I have two enemies.

By: mrh

mrh — Thu, 08 Apr 2004 02:06:28 +0000

brilliant!

i loved it and i really liked the structure. instead of waiting for the literary journals to discover it, you should send it in to them. really a killer short story, mig.

By: mig

mig — Tue, 30 Mar 2004 15:39:49 +0000

See, chris, the structure of that piece is the first example of narrative strategy in literature being influenced by the reverse-navigation structure of your average blog. I was trying to write something as hard to read and confusing as blog archives. Looks like it was a success. Now, I’ll just sit here and wait for some big literature journal to discover this New Thing.

By: chris

chris — Tue, 30 Mar 2004 02:30:09 +0000

with backwards hard up keeping.

By: mig

mig — Mon, 29 Mar 2004 14:53:57 +0000

The girls would *love* that.

I’ll see if I can find a square yard of wax somewhere. Or maybe they could just wrap duct tape around their hands, sticky side out, and go crazy.

By: Jessica

Jessica — Mon, 29 Mar 2004 11:19:56 +0000

Well, geez, you did get cursed by a fat, aging Gypsy, Mig.
Next time, let her wax your back: the hair will come back finer, and softer, and will take its time doing it, and she’ll get a sense of satisfaction from the loud ripping sounds.
Or maybe that’s just me. B’s such a sport.