Comments on: Welcome to the Kundalini Ballroom Institute of Social Dancing

By: miguel

miguel — Wed, 20 Nov 2002 10:48:21 +0000

i had the same thought last night. i think that’s the very reason.

if this ever gets published, the $$ will just cover physical therapy if i’m lucky.

By: Jessica

Jessica — Wed, 20 Nov 2002 06:37:30 +0000

Say, you don’t suppose those spasms could have anything to do with SITTING AT A COMPUTER AND TYPING OUT 50K WORDS IN 10 DAYS, do ya?

By: Jessica

Jessica — Wed, 20 Nov 2002 06:36:52 +0000

Kundalini serpents and streetside sausage stand sex. Woet!

By: miguel

miguel — Tue, 19 Nov 2002 20:36:22 +0000

::later::

like family dynamics, where you send one kid off to reform school and the other ones all change their behavior until a new equilibrium is found, adding vikram resulted in a detective character getting a whole new family history, a love interest, more importance in the book *and* an unusual sex scene at a streetside sausage stand in Vienna.

By: miguel

miguel — Tue, 19 Nov 2002 13:14:26 +0000

i’d sort of envisioned him as a dance teacher, but, well, yes, quite…

thing is, see. it’s like this. how much magic and humor can the story stand? should it remain serious and dark, would a little humor help it or would it fall apart?

then i think, who cares? i wrote it in 10 days, save a copy and start from scratch if the humor doesn’t work. so anyway, gotta go get started on vikram.

By: mic

mic — Tue, 19 Nov 2002 04:48:22 +0000

Vikram is Miagi figure. Vikram is a tantalizing and wild thread that runs through the story and makes total sense at the end. Vikram is comic relief. Vikram is much more than he appears to be. Vikram is the only one who understands. Vikram doesn’t want to get involved but ultimately the strength/character of his rubbery kundalini comes through. Vikram is a red herring. Vikram is not really a man. Vikram, through his kundalini, is able to stimulate uploaded brains to orgasm.Vikram is a victim. Vikram owns a 7-11 that was robbed. Vikram owns a motel that was robbed. Vikram owns a liquor store that was robbed. Vikram knows too much. Vikram is a stoolie. Vikram has aids. Vikram meets girl. Vikram loses girl. Vikram gets the brain’s girl. Vikram is a double agent. Vikram is your back speaking through your subconscious screaming for you to never, ever, sit down all hunched over a computer screen writing like a madman for the 2 weeks or so it took you to the goal line.

By: bauke

bauke — Mon, 18 Nov 2002 19:43:20 +0000

“the Guru of Sex”

One of the plottwists is that he ends up (or not, I haven’t seen it yet) in a porn-film.

(With his kundalini-“snake” I’m sure) :-)